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The sky that wasn't blue. by ~ClearSound:iconClearSound:



The sky that wasn't blue.

The priest who never prayed.


The lie that's really true.

The music never played.


The bird that wouldn't fly.

The charity that wouldn't give.


And between you and I,

The love I'd never live.
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woo!
my first deviation on my new account xD

please comment!
I need opinions.

(I didn't think much of this one though :()

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:iconfinalight:
It's fantastic, you've already heard my comments on it.

I'd totally be JUMPING OFF THE WALLS if I was as great a poet as youu <3

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:iconsayuri-uzumaki:
Awww,sounds pretty
GOODDDAAAAA JOOOOBBBB.
Seriously,it takes me like 20 minutes just to think of half a stanza.
:P i suck.

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Waiting...waiting...waiting...OMG!!HERE IT COMES!!IT'S...IT'S.................................a fly.
:iconclearsound:
aww thanks ^^

and you don't suck. anyone can write poetry.

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This page is my victim,
This pen is my sword.


(All fear the writer)

;D
:iconclearsound:
xD thanks badot!

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This page is my victim,
This pen is my sword.


(All fear the writer)

;D
:iconfinalight:
Welcome (;

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Icon by the lovely~IgneousRocks.
:iconsayuri-uzumaki:
uh hu.
Not me

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Waiting...waiting...waiting...OMG!!HERE IT COMES!!IT'S...IT'S.................................a fly.
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Allisonnn. I'm so dead on DA -_-
But that's ok!
Anywho~
I f`cking love this xD
And if there's anyone who I know that can write proper poetry... it's you xD
:iconclearsound:
aww :hug:
you flatter me. xD

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This page is my victim,
This pen is my sword.


(All fear the writer)

;D
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great line structure on this one.
i don't think it would have the same effect if all the lines were written right after each other, instead of spaced like these ones.

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I have moved to a different account.

my username is now imperfection-reigns

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