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Can I be close to you?

by ~ClearSound

Darling, I'm sorry


for the parched wording,
the dry vows,
terms of agreement, croaked the white dove
in that white chapel of whiskey floorboards,


for the way the moonbeam hit the windows,
and the way you said his name.


I'm sorry, darling


for the (nothing) that came in seg-
ments,
and the dusty diary memories, pieces of
lost-lover's hymns,
for the sweetness at the tip of your tongue
and the finger at your lips.




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, and that's when he realized that some girls deserved stardust and galaxies,
and he was bright fluorescent light clouding their vision.
:iconclearsound:
Oh, you fill my head with pieces
of a song I can't get out.
:music:

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Can I be close to you? by *ClearSound Suggester Writes: shows a maturity and a well-developed writing style, despite the writer's young age of 15. ( Suggested by !pixieplay and Featured by ^Beccalicious )
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:iconarchelyxs:
You are amazing.
So many congratulations. :heart:
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:iconclearsound:
:heart: Thank you so much. Means a lot coming from you. (:

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"To realize you are just one story walking among millions. To not feel the bright lights even as they fill the air. To see the tall buildings and only feel a deep longing for the stars."
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*RiseandBe Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I absolutely adore the last two lines. Gorgeous imagery, as always. Congrats on the DD!

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"A light to burn all the empires, so bright the sun is ashamed to rise and be."

Proud Co-founder of #PoeticalCondition and Contributer to #Breathing-Poetry and #Poets-and-Warriors! Check us out!
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:iconclearsound:
<3 Thank you so much, m'love

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"To realize you are just one story walking among millions. To not feel the bright lights even as they fill the air. To see the tall buildings and only feel a deep longing for the stars."
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*RiseandBe Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure, as always!

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"A light to burn all the empires, so bright the sun is ashamed to rise and be."

Proud Co-founder of #PoeticalCondition and Contributer to #Breathing-Poetry and #Poets-and-Warriors! Check us out!
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:iconbreathingglassstars:
you're magnificent. :heart:
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:iconclearsound:
as are you <3

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"To realize you are just one story walking among millions. To not feel the bright lights even as they fill the air. To see the tall buildings and only feel a deep longing for the stars."
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:iconinterstellarflight:
GIRL YOU GOT A DD /SCREAMING

Congrats babe you are the most fabulous poet
wow no i cannot make sentences right now
i think thats why we compliment each other
you write amazing
i write bad
opposites attract

but back to the point AHH YOU SO DESERVE THIS /SMUSHES MY FACE AGAINST YOU
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:iconclearsound:
LOOL YUP. Thank you, bbg. <3 You're fantastic. ily. thank you. (:

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"To realize you are just one story walking among millions. To not feel the bright lights even as they fill the air. To see the tall buildings and only feel a deep longing for the stars."
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:iconinterstellarflight:
You're welcome! : )
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